雅思写作语法错误分析

#雅思#雅思作文语法错误分析

有许多同学高考英语分数很高，中学阶段的语法学的很好，但是当他们开始备考雅思的时候，发现自己的语法知识竟然不能帮助他们写一篇分数很高的文章，最大的一个原因就是作文中的语法错误太多，

下面给大家展示和分析一下考生们句子里的各种语法问题，以及这些语法问题的错误原因和如何修改。

下面列出了20个有语法错误的句子，建议大家先看原句，思考一下语法问题在哪里，之后再看一下错误原因，接着自己思考一下如何修改，最后看一下修改过的句子。

1. Surfing the Internet can help old people do not feel isolated and lonely.

错误原因：help是及物动词，后面不能再跟句子了。

改正：Old people will not feel isolated and lonely, if they surf the Internet or do leisure activities.

2. People are easy to misunderstand local customs and habits.

错误原因：easy只能说一个事情的难易，而不能说人。

改正：People are likely to misunderstand local customs and habits.

3. Visitors find it hard to talk with hotel staffs.

错误原因：staff是“全体员工”的意思，本身已经是复数，不能加s了。

改正：Foreign visitors find it hard to communicate with the staff of local hotels.

4. These social media platforms can provide them with a very convenient way to maintain strong relationship.

错误原因：relationship是可数名词，要加冠词或者复数。

改正：These social media platforms can provide them with a very convenient way to maintain a strong relationship with friends and colleagues.

5. Students who find employment were the highest proportion of Australian graduates in 1999 and 2000.

错误原因：students是人，proportion是数字，两者不匹配。

改正：Students who find employment made up the highest proportion of Australian graduates in 1999 and 2000.

6. The proportion of students who were unemployment was the lowest.

错误原因：unemployment是名词“失业”，而students是人，不能说“人失业”，而是应该用形容词unemployed，表示状态“失业的”。

改正：The proportion of students who were unemployed was the lowest.

7. The same trend also saw in other countries.

错误原因：see是一个及物动词，不能没有被动，也没有宾语。

改正：The same trend was also seen in other countries. 或 Other countries saw the same trend.

8. Financial reasons and employment were responsible for 19% and 18% of the reasons why people chose to leave the UK.

错误原因：分子应该是人，而不是原因。

改正：19% and 18% of people left the UK for financial reasons and job opportunities.

9. We could donate money to poor people, making their lives happy and satisfied.

错误原因：satisfied不能修饰lives，只能说人, sb. is satisfied with sth.

改正：We could donate money to poor people, and they will be happy and satisfied with their lives.

10. By helping the old, the disabled and the homeless, community cohesion can be enhanced.

错误原因：community cohesion不是help动作的发出者。

改正：By help the old, the disabled and the homeless, we can build a peaceful community together.

11. People should to be friendly to each other and dress formally on these occasions.

错误原因：should后面只能加do，或者be动词。

改正：People should be friendly to each other and dress formally on these occasions.

12. Doing unpaid work and helping others can make people live in a happy life.

错误原因：live表示“过一种...生活”直接加宾语，不需要加介词。

改正：People can live a happy life by doing unpaid work and helping others.

13. Mechanisation may be have a positive effect on a country’s economy.

错误原因：be和动词原形永远不能放一起。

改正：Mechanisation may have a positive effect on a country’s economy.

14. Mechanisation is a significant improvement in manufacturing because its accuracy is higher than us.

错误原因：accuracy不能和us不搭配。

改正：Mechanisation is a significant improvement in manufacturing because machines can complete work more accurately than we do.

15. Workers try to upgrade skills to be a manager, salesman or designer.

错误原因：workers是复数，manager, salesman和designer都是单数。

改正：Workers try to upgrade skills to work as managers , marketers or designers.

16. Companies relying on technology and machines can enhance the quality of products.

错误原因：companies不能提高产品质量，科技可以。

改正：Technology and machines can improve the quality of products produced by companies.

17. Well-educated people can improve social productivity.

错误原因：人是不能提高社会生产力的。

改正：Well-educated people are highly productive.

18. A engineer who is well-informed about all theories about different mechanical problems can design and improve machines.

错误原因：engineer的冠词是an。

改正：An engineer who is well-informed about all theories about different mechanical problems can design and improve machines.

19. Polytechnics and other institutions can provide training in car repairing, building and hairdressing and all of which enable young people to earn money earlier.

错误原因：定语从句关系代词前不用加and。

改正：Polytechnics and other institutions can provide training in car repairing, building and hairdressing, all of which enable young people to earn money earlier.

20. Some students have chosen to study in farming.

错误原因：study及物动词，不用加介词。