做题就做高考真题（2018高考英语III短文改错给你意外的收获）

真题呈现

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.

正确答案

1.begin改为begun.

2.wait改为waiting.

3.and改为or.

4.eager take 中间加to.

5.myself改为my或者the.

6. that去掉。

7.larger改为large.

8. include 改为includes.

9.mistake改为mistakes.

10. Immediate改为Immediately.

答案解析

1.考查谓语动词的时态。从全文及本句It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin中可知，全文以过去时为基调。为并列句第一句为并列句，第二个分句用过去完成时，但表达形式不对，错误地写成了had begin，应该为had begun。

2.考查了非谓语动词的用法。在文句Everyone was silent, wait to see...处，Everyone was silent作为句子的主体，wait to see...要做句子的伴随状语，以此可以判断was作为句子的谓语，wait则要用非谓语动词形式waiting。

拓展：短语结构做状语的考查是高考热点，其主要有：分词结构，名词短语，形容词短语；独立主格等。

3考查连词的用法。此题要明确and和or的区别。and和or最大的区别在于,or 表示两者只取其一,and 表示两者皆是.and是“和”的意思表示事物之间的并列,而or是或者的意思表示事物间的选择,二选一,选择句容易出现在疑问句中。

4.考查了非谓语的用法。Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity处，可以确定出were为句子的谓语，take part in 作为动词短语，则用非谓语形式，作状语。根据句中谓语动词和非谓语动词的动作先后关系，此处用不定式，即to take part in .

5.考查代词的用法。根据do one"s homework，所以one"s在句中用形容词物主代词，结合主语I，则I had done myself homework 处，把“myself”改为my。同时my的用法可以用the替代。因此，myself改为the或者my.

6.考查非谓语动词和关系代词that的用法。 分析I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people此句，可以明确的是：此句为简单句，was为谓语，to speak为非谓语，作状语，且to speak与主干直接相连，不需要关系代词that。同时that作关系代词时，引导句子。综合以上分析，此句中的that需要去掉。

7.考查了形容词的级的用法。I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people的句意为：我害怕在一大群人面前讲话。显然句子没有比较的概念，因此larger改为large.

8.考查词性转换。The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks ，and mistake as well.此句句子相对较长，分析时要会断句。句子分为The classroom is a place for learning和 and that include leaning from textbooks ，and mistake as well两部分。and that include leaning from textbooks ，and mistake as well处和前面部分为并列句。后句中that做主语，include作谓语，要用单数形式：includes.

9.考查了可数名词复数形式。从from textbooks ，and mistake 处分析，一个非常典型的平衡结构，mistake 要与 textbooks 对应，改成复数形式：mistakes.

10.考查词性转换。分析 Immediate, I raised my hand处， Immediate处在状语位置，应该为：Immediately.副词(adv)修饰动词(v)，形容词(adj)，副词(adv)，以及整个句子。

真题译文

那是星期一上午，写作课才刚开始。大家都默不作声，等着看谁会被叫来大声朗读他或者她的段落。我们中的一些人很自信，也很渴望达到标准。 在课堂活动中，其他人紧张而焦虑。我自己做了作业，但我很害羞。我害怕在一大群人面前讲话。就在那一刻，我想起了我的父亲曾经说过：“教室是学习的地方，包括学习课本，也包括错误。”立刻，我举起了我的手。