英语课堂01：英语作文提分必看（这样写作文至少多拿10分）
大家在学习英语的过程中，一听到写作，经常感到头皮发麻，那我们该如何快速入门呢？
Do you have trouble writing English?
在英语写作方面 你感到很困难吗
Poor writing can make you look unprofessional.
糟糕的写作能力会显得你很不专业
It can affect the outcome of your job application, the score of your exam,or whether you"ll get a promotion.
它会影响你求职的结果 考试的分数 甚至是你的职业晋升
So if you want to be prepared for these situations,
如果你想要应对这些情况的话
let me show you the writing exercise that I do, to improve my own writing skills.
让我给你们展示一下 我是如何用这种方式来提高我的写作能力的
To do this exercise, you need to find something that was written by a native English speaker.
要做这个练习 你需要找一些以英语为母语的人写的素材
This could be an article on the Internet, a chapter from a book, or even a resume.
素材可以是网上的一篇文章 其中一本书中的一章 甚至是一份简历
So here I have an article titled "How to Find a Hobby".
这里有一篇文章 叫做"如何找到一个兴趣爱好"
And I"m going to practice my writing with this article.
我准备通过这篇文章来进行我的写作练习
So first, what I"m going to do is, I"m going to read the first sentence,
所以 我要做的第一件事就是 我先读第一个句子
and make sure that I understand everything.
并确保我读懂了这句话
If there"s a word or phrase I don"t know, I"ll look it up.
如果遇到了什么单词或短语我不懂的 我会查字典
So let"s say I don"t know what the phrase means.
那假设说我不懂这个短语
I can go to Google and type in that phrase.
我可以去查找谷歌 把这个短语输进去
All right, so "line of work" means the activity in your life that you do to earn money.
所以 line of work指的就是你生活中为了赚钱而做的一些职业
So it basically means a job or an occupation.
所以 它基本的意思就是一份工作或职业
OK, now that I understand the whole sentence,
好了 现在我已经知道这句话的意思了
I"m going to take a moment to memorize it.
我需要一点点时间去记住它
Then I"ll switch to this text editor and I will write down the sentence from memory.
然后 我将切换到这个文本编辑器 我将根据记忆默写这个句子
Now, if I can"t remember some of the words in the sentence,
那好 假如现在我有点单词记不起来怎么写了
I"ll just make a guess or I might use other words with similar meanings.
我可能会瞎猜一下 或者是我用意思相近的词进行代替
OK, Next, I"m going to compare what I wrote with the original to see if I made any mistakes.
接下来 我要把我写的和原文比较一下 看看是否有错
And if I did, I will correct them.
如果哪里有错了 我会纠正它
OK, after I"ve fixed my mistakes,
在我纠正好我的错误之后
I"ll write the sentence one more time without making the same mistakes.
我会把这个句子再写一遍 不犯同样的错误
So I"m going to delete this and do it one more time.
所以 我会把原来的句子删掉 然后再重新写一遍
And that"s it.
好了
After I"m done with the first sentence, I"ll repeat the same steps with the next sentence.
完成第一个句子后 我会用同样的方法来练习第二个句子
So, step 1: I read and memorize the sentence.
所以 第一步是 我会先阅读并记忆这个句子
Step 2: I write down the sentence from memory.
第二步 我会凭记忆默写这个句子
Step 3: I compare what I wrote with the original.
第三步 将自己默写的句子和原始文稿进行比较
This time, I didn"t make any mistakes, so I don"t have to do anything.
这一次我默写全对了 所以我不需要修改任何东西
But if I did make mistakes, I will correct them and I will delete this sentence,
但如果我写错了 我会改正过来 并删除之前自己默写的
and write it down one more time for repetition.
并再写一遍正确的
Now, when you do this exercise, you"ll often come across long sentences like this one.
在你用这种方法练习的时候 你经常会遇到像这样的长句子
This is very common in written English.
这在英文写作中是很常见的
And it can be difficult for beginners to memorize them.
这对于初学者来说 是比较难去记住的
So, whenever you have to practice with a long sentence like this,
所以 当你要练习像这样的长句子时
you can break it down into smaller parts and practice one part at a time.
你可以把一个长句子分成多个部分 一次只练习一个部分
So, for this sentence, you can practice this part first.
这个句子的话 你就可以先练习这一小部分
So you do all the steps with just this part before moving on to the second part.
所以 在进行第二部分的练习之前 你只需要按照之前的方法完成第一部分的练习就可以了
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