高效训练 提高短文改错应试效率（四）

只有刻意训练，高效训练，才能提高应试效率。今天，小编与大家分享“高效训练，提高短文改错应试效率”系列（四），希望对大家有所帮助。

真题呈现

My name is Linda,I used to living in the countryside of Chicago with my parents, that was born in New York,Living in the countryside have a lot of advantages ，The air isn"t polluted ，and the environment is clearly .Besides,the neighbors are friendly for each each other. However ，there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as weii as,If you have job downtown ，you have to spend many time on the road every day,And life in the countryside isn"t very excited,so most teenagers like to live downtown ，When I complete high school at 20,I moved to California to study at a university.

参考答案

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单句解析

短文改错的考点分布具体的单句中，因此我们做题应该以句子为单位，进行有效解析。

I used to living in the countryside of Chicago with my parents, that was born in New York.used to“过去常常”，其后跟动词原形；

句中逗号之后为非限制性定语从句，其先行词为I，所以引导词为who.

2.The air isn"t polluted ，and the environment is clearly .

根据语境需要系表结构，因此把clearly改为形容词clear.

3.Besides,the neighbors are friendly for each other.

be friendly to sb“对……友好”，因此for改为to.

4.However ，there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as well as.

as well“也”，as well as“和.一样好，和……”。根据句意，语境需要用as well.

5.If you have job downtown ，you have to spend many time on the road every day.

job为可数名词，根据语境，在job需要加a.

time为不可数名词，因此把many改为much.

6.And life in the countryside isn"t very excited,so most teenagers like to live downtown .

exciting修饰物，excited修饰人。根据语境：农村的生活不是有趣的。因此把excited改为exciting.

7.When I complete high school at 20,I moved to California to study at a university.

语境所体现为过去发生的事，因此complete应该为其过去式completed.