英语写作TIPS |（中国人写作最常见的衔接不当 看完这篇就能避免）

Hello朋友们，这是我们今天的写作tips分享

今天主要分享有关【衔接】方面的内容。

“衔接不当”是中国人写作常见的问题。关于衔接手段，我们有“过渡词衔接（表原因、表转折、表逻辑、表时间等）、语法衔接（照应、省略、替代、连接）和词汇衔接（复现：原词复现、同义词近义词复现、上下义词（如animal, dog）复现等】；同现：反义关系、互补关系等）”。

通常我们会写如下语句These apples are fresh and delicious. Please give me some apples.但其实按照英语的逻辑，应该是These apples are fresh and delicious. Please give me some.通过替代和省略的方法，使语言组织更加紧凑简洁。

常见的例子还有：

【过渡词衔接】I am ill. I cannot go to school.

可写为：I am ill, so I cannot go to school.

【语法衔接】With the rapid development of technologies, the old copyright law was not able to balance interests among authors, propagators and users.

可写为：As technologies develop quickly, the old copyright law was not able to balance interests among authors, propagators and users.

【词汇衔接】Economic and population trends in California show that Hispanics, Blacks, and Asians will have increasing economic influence as their numbers continue to increase. Research says that California’s population will increase by 500,000 people a year, two-thirds of this increase will be Hispanics and Asians, and the Hispanic 18-to-24-olds will increase by 40 percent.

可写为：Economic and population trends in California show that Hispanics, Blacks, and Asians will have increasing economic influence as their numbers continue to grow. Research says that California’s population will expand by 500,000 people a year, two-thirds of this increase will be Hispanics and Asians, and the Hispanic 18-to-24-olds will increase by 40 percent.

你还遇到过哪些写作方面的问题呢？欢迎一起讨论！