冲击满分：英语作文
高考满分作文的要求
1.覆盖全部要点——审题
注意：图画作文切勿遗漏图中细节
2.结构合理，，详略得 详略得当，，过渡自自然——行行文
注意：“老三段”式作文容易让人厌倦，要有总结性和引文性段落，借助过
渡段让文章流畅
3.高级词汇，复杂句式 复杂句式，语法 确 法正确——积累
4.合理想象——加分
1.使用高级词汇和短语让文章提升档次
描写国家：
农业的 agricultural
工业的 industrial
现代化的 modern
发展中的/不发达的 developing/underdeveloped
文明的 civilized
先进的 advanced
爱好和平的 peaceful
强大的 powerful
繁荣的 prosperous
描写校园文明：
规章制度/纪律 rules/regulations/discipline
遵守(纪律) keep/observe/obey
表现良好 behave well
穿戴整洁 be neatly dressed
考试作弊 cheat in the exam
●必须明确的 必须明确的 点是 一点是，学生们应该…
It must be made clear that the students should…
● …对构建和谐校园环境非常有益。
… is helpful/beneficial to a harmonious campus environment.
●遵守学校的规章制度是光荣的/值得表扬的。
It is honorable to obey the principles and rules of our school It is honorable to obey the principles and rules of our school.
It is worthy of praise to…
2.使用复杂句式使文章错落有致
Well begun is half done. 引人入胜的开头
① A “ i i” As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”.
On the one hand, …; On the other hand, …
②随着人口的增加
With the increase/growth of the population, …
随着科技的进步
With the advance of science and technology, …
③虚拟语气：What would you do if you were…? What would you do if you were…?
疑问句开头：Have you ever heard that…?
④开门见山亮观点：
There is a general discussion today about the issue of....; Those who object
to... argue that ...;They believe that...; But people who favor ..., on the other to... argue that ...;They believe that...; But people who favor ..., on the other
hand, argue that ...
多记句型，考场上不慌：
1. There is no denyy g ing that… 不可否认…
2. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 再怎
么强调...的重要性也不为过。
3. It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 众所周
知…
As is known to all,…
4. On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能...
5 When it comes to playing computer games he will be very excited 5. When it comes to playing computer games, he will be very excited. 当 谈 当一谈
到…时，…就…
6. Gi /C d h lifi ti I thi k h i it d t th j b Given/Concerned her qualifications, I think she is suited to the job. 考虑到 考虑到…
7. to be frank; to be honest; to tell the truth; to be safe; to be short; to make
things worse; to start with
8. That is the reason why I don’t like you.
那就是...的原因
9. It is through reading that we get our knowledge.
强调句型
10. A good idea suddenly occurred to me that I could use my pocket money to
buy a present for my mother. buy a present for my mother.
It occurred to me that… 某人突然想到…
11. No sooner had I arrived home than I started to read No sooner had I arrived home than I started to read.
Hardly…when… 一…就…
文章展开段：
1.时间地点要交代细致
2.灵活运用从句
Dad and I planed to prepare a big surprise for my mom, who was working as
an ordinary professional woman and did a lot for the whole family.
新人物出场，或描述人、事、物时，大胆使用定语从句。
3.借助连接词 借助连接词，使文章过渡自然 使文章过渡自然，连贯连贯通顺通顺
时间顺序：
at th ti ll f dd ft d t the same time, all of a sudden, afterwards
No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…
No sooner had I arrived at the lakeside than I was surprised to find a boy,
who was struggling in the lake.
逻辑顺序：
递进: besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)
转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the country(相反)，
after all(毕竟)
总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之),
in conclusion(最后)
强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定)，
above all( above all(尤其)
对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如),
on the one hand on the other hand on the one hand…on the other hand
4.学会设置悬念
all of a sudden 突然
Unfortunately/Luckily/Fortunately/Unexpectedly…
不幸幸的是/幸幸运的是/没想到的是…
To my surprise/delight/sorrow/astonishment/disappointment
令令 吃惊的 人吃惊的/高高 的兴的/悲伤的 悲伤的/惊讶的 惊讶的/失望的是 失望的是…
To make things worse… 更糟糕的是…
5.适时渲染气氛
That day was bright, with a delight breeze blowing. Pieces of clouds floated
across the sky every now and then. In the genial sunshine of spring, we…
文章结尾
总结陈述，表明观点
实战演练：
人们对学生网上交友意见不同，请你用英语写 请你用英语写 篇关于学生网上交友的短文 一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，
介绍不同观点，并表达自己看法。
赞成理由 赞成理由:1:1.广交朋友 广交朋友;2;2.可自由表达思想 可自由表达思想;3;3.利于语言学习 利于语言学习
反对理由:1.浪费时间;2.影响学习;3.可能上当受骗
注意：
1.文章必须包括上述全部内容
2.词数100左右
小结：
11.积累积累————高级词汇 高级词汇，复杂句式 复杂句式，语法语法
别让基础工作都白白浪费，在最能显示英文水平的作文上为自己拿分。
2.构思行文——审题，结构，过渡，想象
时间地点要交代细致，大胆用从句，借助连接词，学会设置悬念，适时渲染
气氛
3.开开引 胜 头引人入胜，，过程程 相扣 环环相扣，，结尾掷尾掷 有声 地有声
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